My son came to me after school today with a poem that he has been working on in school ( in lunch time club), I thought I would share it with you all.
He really enjoys writing stories and at the moment he is interested in poems.
The Moon
The moon is a silver brooch
On a ink black velvet gown.
The full moon has the emotion
Of a baboons frown.
You won’t need any sunlotion
In fact you will need a red hot potion.
The moon is a 50 pence piece
Dropped by god to start up a feast.
I’m sure he will find it too! Loved the connection between the full moon and the baboons frown Jak, you write exceedingly well for a man of your age, x
I can’t stop him now Berni, he’s written another two 🙂
Find that boy a publisher lol x
Bless him thats lovely, well done Jak for writing so beautifully x
Thank you, he’ll be checking the comments tomorrow on here, he loves reading them. He dreams of fame and fortune lol.