The Moon by Jak (9 yrs)

My son came to me after school today with a poem that he has been working on in school ( in lunch time club), I thought I would share it with you all.

He really enjoys writing stories and at the moment he is interested in poems.

The Moon

The moon is a silver brooch

On a ink black velvet gown.

The full moon has the emotion

Of a baboons frown.

You won’t need any sunlotion

In fact you will need a red hot potion.

The moon is a 50 pence piece

Dropped by god to start up a feast.


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